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Y1.4 Tutorial – F205
Wednesday | November 25, 2020
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Tutor/ Max Colson
What I have learned?
Find the form to present these images with some context. You can just present the images with the sentences of the sentences from the story, or you can be more experimental; use text/ typography, not only images.
Reference: War Primer by Bertolt Brecht
Circulate the project!
Who is the reader? Create a context that the reader will engage with. How the reader is involved (meaning)?
Classmate/ Conor Maguire
The story can be shorter that the reader can get the message more quickly and easier.
Classmate/ Marta Zabik
You can be careful about what is showing in the one-page book. The drawing can be put in order (when the reader goes through the book); the same sequence as the song.
Classmate/ Greece
I can feel the depression more with the photos, but when you turn it into a photo, the rhythm in the music and in the story is missing. I can consider the process of the song; slow at first, climax end, for my development.